Pokemon Adventures  ''searching for a find''

Discaimer : My english is preety good and i will make 5 more chapters
I promose..... anywho heres my story hope you like it PART 1 COMIN AT YA.

A whistle blows. ''end of round two Michael you win!'' ''Good job Ratata'' says Michael.
The other trainer sighs. ''Return Cyndaquill''.A red beam showers over the pokemon
and he returns into a little ball.Micahael puts his pokemon in his breast pocket so it can
see out.half an hour later Michael our hero sets on a journey to rustboro to encounter
the gym leader there.Michael as proud as proud proud can be reaches the tip of route
115. Michael thinks to himself ''should I catch another pokemon on my journey to 
rustboro or should I just continue with ratata''. He decides to catch another pokemon
he was looking for a charmander next. Michael travelled through the vast area 
(route 115) to encounter a charmellion. ''This is a better catch my lucky day!''
he said out loud. meanwhile un aware around him was a girl with ginger hair
yellow shirt and blue denim jeans watching him catch a pokemon.
''Go ratata!'' His ratata jumps out of Michaels breast pocket n leaps for charmellion.
''Ratata tackle!'' shouts Michael. Ratata hits the charmellion and a thud to the ground
lay a weakened charmellion. Michael throw's a pokeball 1....2.....3 the pokemon was
caught. ''Got'cha your mine!'' says Michael with a pleased face. The girl walks toward
him ''your a good trainer hi im misty the cerriluen gym leader'' says misty.

To be continued....

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