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                      Part 2 you guy hope you like it!
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     She stepped up to the line and took a fight stance. Falconer thew the pokeball into the ring and brought out a pidgy! Flare atomaticly attacked useing Quick Attack. She appeared at the left then on the right. "Pidgy! Use gust to knock it off its feet!" Pidgy nodded and flew up high and created a gust, but it was to late. Flare had gotten close enough and headbutted right into pidgy. Pidgy and flare fell to the ground flare on her feet pidgy well lets just say its beak got stuck while it was unconssious. "Pidgy return" called Falconer. pidgy dissapeared but in its place stood pidgeotto!
     "Great  now a pidgeotto!" Flare said to her self. She took up a stance again but pigeotto ,allready dived useing Peck, hit flare on the shoulder blade. she squeaked in supprise rolling back but used ember  on the bird as it flew by. The pokemon tumbbled and fainted. Flare pounced over to Falconer "Well still think im just a wimp?" Falconer smiled."no not any more and by leage rules I confer to you the Zephry badge and a leather satchel to keep you badges in." Flare thanked him took her prizes and proudly walked out of the gym into the sun light.
      She decided to vist the pkmn center before she left. she was treated by nurse joy when she noticed something in the corner moveing. she walked over to it. It was egg. A pokemon egg to be infact and it was close to hatching. She decided to take her find with her.She picked up the egg and walked out and down towards union cave and her next badge!
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          Long aint it?
aso check ou my old storys of a girl named shay and her parent mist ah her friends alahea and sean and her new pkmn KOUGRA!

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