Hey guys 1 piece of bad news I decided not to do ash and the Japanese toilet.
There are 3 reasons why I haven't updated in a while. 1 I am really mad that
I didn't get ANY reviews from people. Btw if you read and you think other
people will review WRONG just send me something telling me if you like it or not.
that works. 2 I have been felling down lately and IM in a slump. 3 I was one
of the most visited authors statistically and im really new! no reviews came.
so heres chapter 4 SEND ME A REVIEW OR ELSE NO MORE STORY MWAHHAHAHA.


   When brock woke up he looked around and saw he was drenched in drool. He
said "ughh not again."Then he noticed that Ash was sitting up in his sleeping
bag and just staring at Misty. He thought that was strange since Misty always
made fun of Ash. then Ash got up and walked over to the campfire from last
night and started another fire. then Ash walked over to where brocks bag was and
started searching for ingredients for breakfast. Brock sat up and said "Well
Ash have you taken a liking to cookking?"Ash jumped 6 feet in the air "i didn't
know you were awake Brock. Maybe you should change clothes first." Brock
replied okay but let me cook breakfast okay you always burn it." Ash shook his
head "No I'm cooking breakfast today." then smiling he went back to searching
through Brock's bag.

   About 10 minutes later Misty woke up and saw Ash. she sighed and wispered
"my night in shinig armor well metaphorically."She decided to pretend to be
asleep for a little longer. She noticed that he was cooking and thought i
didn't know he could cook I thought that he burned it every time. Ash sighed and
said to himself "I hope making breakfast for misty will make her like me. I wish
we didn't fight." Misty was shocked did he really care about her.

welll guys chaoter 4 was actually longer when i wrote it but the reason I
decided to stop here is I'm going to take the poll on my story. One choice is
that i end it really gushy and i dont go deeper into the story and dont explain
the title to you the other is wher the story continues as planned The first
choice is 1 and the second 2 send me an email with at least eithe 1 or 2.
remember like hate flame it like its a burger tell me at speedway800@aol.com. P.S. no
flames i alredy have 4th dgree burns from a toaster.
pps The date i wrote this is June 10, 2003