When a Promise Breaks Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon or any related characters so don't sue me!!!
By AZN Individual
Part 1
A/N: This is my first fanfic/AAMRN so sorry if it's not the best!! oh yeh, this story is rated pg-13 for mild language, some sexual content (No strong details!!), use of weapons, and violent behavior. U can e-mail comments to AZNgoThPriDE@cs.com! Enjoy!!
ash/misty/gary- 16 brock/tracey- 19
it was a nice summer night and ash, misty, brock, and tracey were sleeping and ash had woken up, kissing misty while she was sleeping. misty, shocked to this action, woke up.
"what r u doing?!?!?" misty shouted at ash as she moved away from him.
"uhhh...." ash turned red as he was rubbing the back of his head in embarrassment brock, tracey, and pikachu woke up from the noise and noticed what was going on: ash had given misty his little surprised he had planned. there was an awkward silence. then finally ash broke the silence.
"misty, i'm sorry... i guess i didn't what i was doing..."
"ASH KETCHUM!!! U DID KNOW WHAT U WERE DOING!!!!"
"uhhh.... misty wait! i can explain it!!"
"explain it to someone who cares!!!!!" and with that, misty quickly packed up her things and walked away towards pallet town. it was now about 6: 30 in the morning and everyone was fully awake by now. brock and tracey looked at ash in confusion.
"well, at least u got to kiss her...." tracey said sheepishly.
"it didn't go as well as i expected it to...."
"hey, ash! don't feel bad! she'll get over it!!" said brock comfortly.
"pi chu kachu...(don't feel guilty...)
"o.k...."they also packed up their stuff and went to catch up with misty. the place where they had camped for the nite wasn't so far from pallet so they wud get there shortly. they soon had a sight of a red head and was about to run up to her but ash remembered what he did earlier this morning.
they reached pallet town and misty, instead of going to the ketchum residence, headed for the beach. so ash, brock, and tracey took a quick change in to their bathing shorts and followed misty without her knowing. she set up her stuff near the water (not too close) and just lay down on her towel relaxing. ash, brock and tracey set up their stuff not too far from misty. ash was still sulking and feeling guilty about what he did. he was drawing figures in the sand and drew the word 'Misty' with a heart around it. he stared at it for a while the broke out of his trance as heard a way-too-familiar voice. he looked up. it was Gary! and he was talkin to Misty.
"Hey Misty! So where are your loser friends?"
"i ditched them... i mean ash did something to make me mad so i kinda left them for now..."
"well... since your not hanging out with them anymore... wanna join me??"
Misty thought a while, about how she would look in a cheerleading outfit with pom- poms and all. then she suddenly noticed ash, brock and tracey in the distance listening to the whole conversation. Misty thought of something quick.
"uhhh.. I'll go with u!!"
"WAAAAA!!!" Ash said in shock. Brock and Tracey just had their jaws opened.
"Great! So come on! what r u waiting for?!" said Gary
"Oh" Misty quickly packed up her stuff and followed Gary to his red corvette with all his cheerleaders. Ash, Brock, Tracey, and Pikachu watched as Misty drove off with Gary and the rest of his cheerleaders.
"Come on!! We have to follow Gary!!" said Ash. So they packed up their stuff as quick as they cud and followed Gary to an exspensive hotel. There were gates in front of the hotel and security guards on each end of the gate. They let Gary and everyone else in. Then they saw Ash, Brock, and Tracey go thru the gates.
"uh, i'm sorry young man, u don't have permission to enter." one of the security guards said.
"But I need to get in!!"
"no can do..."
"Go home now!"
So Ash, Brock, and Tracey pretended to head home but instead, hid in the bushes in the parking lot. they had sneaked thru the gates by hiding in the back of a truck while it was getting checked. they had gotten thru the gates and went inside the lobby.
"Hello, welcome! How many rooms will u need sir?"
"Uhh.." Ash looked at brock and tracey. "one room please..."
"o.k. here are your keys, sir! have a good night!"
"Uhh... Ash, tell me y we only got one room??"
"because the rooms here are really exspensive, tracey!"
"oh, rite.. i knew that!!"
"o.k. here's the room! room 218.." Ash slides the key into the slot and opens the door.
"Good, there's two beds! I get the water bed by myself... u guys can share...(Yawns) good nite brock, tracey" Ash falls asleep on the water bed. Brock and Tracey look at each other and sweatdropped.
"I know we can move Ash to the floor and we can get both of the beds ourselves!!"
"Hey, that's a great idea Brock!" Brock and tracey gently picked up Ash and set him down on the floor.
"There now i get the water bed and u get the regular bed."
"O.k. Good nite brock!" they fall asleep and Ash wakes up noticing the uncomfortableness in the 'water bed' he was sleeping on. He felt around him and noticed he was sleeping on the floor!
"How did i get here?? Ooo Brock, im gonna get u!"
Ash jumped on brock. brock instantly woke up.
"Ash what r u doing?!?!"
"Give me back the water bed!!"
"Never!!!"
"U asked for it!!" Ash punched Brock in the face and brock kicked ash off him. then brock punched ash in the face repeatedly. then ash broke thru and hit brock on the head with his backpack and then brock got off Ash. Brock then took the lamp on the night stand and smashed it on Ash's head. Ash then went out cold and fell back to the floor. brock then went back to sleep.
A/N: So wha do u think?? I know, it's not da best but it's mah first fanfic!! Criticizing is also welcome....