POKEMON REVALATION: BY BIGRAI Charcters: Raph-14 Thunder (Raichu)-4 Kim-13 ( ):pokemon speech [ ]: thought < >: pokemon to pokemon Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon, Nintendo and some other people do so don't write me. CHAPTER 1 Raph: [It has been four years sense I started my journey and all I have to show for it is four missed opportunities to be a Orange Champion. I feel like a total failure. What's wrong with me?! I can even sense my best friend getting tired of loosing all the time. WHY CAN'T I GET IT RIGHT!!!!] Raph looks into the eyes of his pokemon and can't hold back his tears any longer. Raph(sobbing): I'm sorry, I've failed as your trainer and friend.Thunder tried to say something to console his friend but even the movement of his mouth caused him pain. They had been in the OR of the pokemon center for hours. It seemed like a lifetime for Raph, he was a wreck. Thunder was even worse. Flat lining twice on the OR table he barely survived. Raph was helpless, this was all his fault if he only had not thought Thunder the new move. Joy: I'm sorry but you'll have to leave now, your Raichu has gone through a lot today. You can take him home in the morning but I would advise that you refrain from battle for at least a month. As Raph lay on the Pokecenter couch he could not get the scene out of his head. It didn't get any better when he went to sleep, but at least it was a change of pace. Announcer: This is the finals of the Orange Islands Pokemon league. Both Jerry and Raph are down to their last pokemon who will they choose. Jerry: It's over Raph. Dragonite go!!! Raph:[A dragonite? This is going to be interesting.] Thunder go!!! As the two pokemon waited for the judge's flag every one in the stadium started wondering how a raichu could beet a dragonite. Judge: GO!!! As soon as the word was said dragonite without command ran and tackled a startled Thunder. Raph: That was cheep! Jerry: So, it's legal. Thunder managed to shake out the cobwebs and his dragonite with a thunderbolt. Dragonite didn't feel a thing. Jerry: If that's all you got then you might as well quit now. Raph(confidently):So you want the full force? OK Thunder try the new move that I thought you. Thunder nodded and leaped high into the air then just stayed there. Jerry: What's that? If your raichu is to scared to fight save us some time and give up. The judge also looked at Raph in a disagreeable manner, but all Raph did was smile. Raph: Just wait a little longer. They didn't have to, as soon as Raph got those words out Thunder finally started to power up. The sky became dark with clouds and it started to rain. Then a bolt of lightning hit Thunder and he started to glow. Thunder: With that Thunder shot out of the sky a glowing mass of pure electricity. Jerry: What the hell is that?! Raph: It's called the thunderbolt crush, and it packs heat. Jerry (very scared): DRAGONITE REFLRCTIONS!!!! ragonite who was also very scared wasted no time in creating the mirror like shield just as Thunder came down on it. To every ones surprise Thunder's new move was not effective, actually Thunder just bounced off the mirror and landed hard on the ground followed by all the electrically he had built up, he was shocked by his own power. Raph: What how did that happen?! Jerry: Yes, it worked now I've got you. But he didn't have to say a word. Dragonite who was very happy that he was not fainted or even worse dead quickly shot a hyper beam into Thunder's chest. Thunder who had used up all his energy couldn't move a muscle. He laid there knowing what was about to happen. The last two things he heard was Raph screaming his name and then is heart stopping, then all went black. Hay if you like the story e-mail me at: Coug785005@cs.com