An unexpected visit The object of war is not to die for your country but to make the other bastrd die for his. -George S. Patton- part- i dont know 8 i think. AAMRN please review! Speedracer41@att.net jeez guys one review? do you honestly hate this story? ok this will be the last part. yea i know the last one sucked but hey! i was time pressured ok?!? disclimer: honestly? Ages: ash-15 misty-15 wade-38 delila-35 lily-18 cameron-15 sara-14 on with the show! the hummve roard down the road toping speeds of 100 mph Ash: cameron you know the speed limit is 50 right? Cam: so? Ash: you're going of 100 Cam: so? Ash: turn here! SCREEECH! Ash: (looks back) nice slide that mark is really dark. there it is SCRREEEEECH! the vehicle slid right inbetween two other cars Cam: go go go! RAP RAP RAP RAP! lily: like who is it? (opens door) Lily: ASH! like you need to hurry misty is like up in her room and like shes gona like kill herself ASH: WHAT? lily: like yea you need to like hurry just leave your bags on the table Ash dropped his bag on the table Cam: ill keep mine with me Ash: lets go The two boys ran up the stairs Ash: crap its locked Cam: SOOOOOOOO?!? Ash: right crack! ash kicked the door in A/C: misty!! ash saw the knife flying towards her heart. so he did the only thing he could think of. he threw himself forward and grabbed the knife right before it reached her chest Misty: A-A-Ash? is Tha-at y-you? Ash: yea i am alive misty: oh ash! she flung herself at him Ash: i missed you too misty Misty: but i thought... Ash: no we made it cameron walked out into the hall to give them some "alone time" THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP he raised his gun. those steps were too heavy to be lilys a tall man turned the corner Cam: stop! the man stopped Cam: identify yourself! the man smiled and raised a gun and fired twice CRACK CRACK! cameron was dead before he hit the floor. ***inside misty's room*** Misty: ash what was that? Ash: i dont know he reached for his gun to find it wasent there. Ash: CRAP! i left my gun in my pack THUMP THUMP THUMP THUMP the man turned the corner Ash: WHO ARE YOU! man: you mean you dont know me. how about i help he took off his hood ASh: DAD?!? ash's dad: yea its a shame i have to do this he raised the gun Misty: who are you?!? wade: my name is wade. wade ketchum Misty: you mean your ash's... Ash: no good, dead beat, deserter of a dad? yes he is wade: dont be too mad i did make something of myself i am now general of the seventh sons ASH: WHAT?!? wade: yes that recon mission was a trap now i have come to finish the job. but im going to make you suffer he aimed at misty crack in that thousandth of a sec ash threw himself infront of misty hitting him in the shoulder Ash: ahhhh wade:ha ha ha die my son he raised the gun again taking carefull aim ***in the hallway*** wade: Die my son! cameron looked over and saw him taking aim his whole world was pulsing and swirling but still Cam: not on your lif he aimed and... ***misty's room*** CRACK! ash braced for the bullet but oddly it never came he looked and saw his dad hit the floor cameron with his gun drawn behind him Ash: CAMERON! Cam: im o.k just get my pokeballs and cal out magnanium and gardevor they will take care of the rest Ash: ok go! nanium! (hello) vor (greetings) Ash: camerons hurt ium! (WHAT?) gar dev ard gard vr vorgar (we will take care of him) ***poketranslater on*** Mag: cameron cameron can you hear me! gard: he is in critical condition go guard the stairs Mag: no! i am staing by his side! i swore to his mother i would guard him! and now look i left his side and this happened! gard: you are just as protective of him as dewgong mag: we both swore to his mother that... gard: look fighting will get us no where! her hands were glowing white she layded one on each bullet wound Cameron: ahh that hurt gard: your alive! Mag: Dont ever scare me like that again! cam: ok ok can you guys go check on the guys outside gard: sure ***poketranslater off*** cameron: ok cpl. i will leave you two love birds alone END! yeaaay! finaly done! now bring on the flames i can take them oh and thanks to the person who wrote that review. you know who you are