Pokémon Adventures

Disclaimer:I DO NOT OWN POKÉMON.if i did then y would i b writing out fan fics 
instead of making cartoons about it????

CHAPTER 1:

a young girl of ten with the name Amber is about to start her pokemon adventures 
although she hasnt got her pokemon yet.....
'huh?now where do i get a pokemon?',Amber said.So she started walking towards 
the grass until a Pidgeotto appears.
The Pidgeotto charges at Amber but suddenly a cloaked boy appears and sends out 
a Zapdos.....
The Legendary bird screeches as Pidgeotto charges at Zapdos but luckily Zapdos 
ses Thunderbolt which knocks Pidgeotto out instantly.
The cloaked boy turns round to face Amber and says 'its not safe here folow me 
and ill take you to Professor Oak and he will give you your first pokemon.'
Amber ends up in Professor Oaks labratory and Prof.Oak gives her a warm 
welcome.'hi! you are here for your first pokemon i suppose?' Oak says.'yeah so 
what pokémon do i get?'Amber asks.
'well young lady,you get to choose from three different types of pokemon,'Oak 
replies.'here are the pokemon'Oak says.Amber notices three pokeballs.'the 
pokemon are inside the pokeballs'Oak explains.'ill show u' he says.
'Bulbasaur,Charmander and Squirtle go!'Oak says.Oak throws the balls and out pop 
three funny looking creatures.Oak points to the green funny looking creature and 
says 
'this is bulbasaur a grass type some reaserchers arent sure whether to call this 
pokemon a plant or an animal and as it grows the bulb on its back opens up and 
its also a very loyal companion.
Then he points to the orange funny looking creature and says 'this is Charmander 
a fire type if the flame on this pokemons tail goes out then it will die but 
just because it looks cute doesn't mean its weak because 
it evolves into a marvelous pokemon called Charizard so its a good pokemon to 
start off with.Then he points to the blue creature that looks like a turtle and 
says 
'finally this is Squirtle a water type pokemon which has a very hard shell and 
is very strong but if frightened or threatened it will 
hide in its shell for proection and the stronger it grows the stronger its shell 
becomes so it can be a tough opponent to defeat.'they look kinda weird for 
animals,'Amber says.
'but they arent animals,they are pokemon,'Oak says 'they are creatures with 
special abilities,they are amazing creatures.'Amber looks at all three of them 
and says 
'i cant decide because they all sound so cool,' 'but since my name is Amber and 
that is to do with fire then ill choose Charmander.' 'ok then here is your 
Pokédex and Pokéballs,'Oak replies with a smile.
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                                   END OF CHAPTER 1

i need ideas and comments on what u think of my first chapter of my second fan 
fic ^_^

CHU!
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