Hey every body this is my first fan fic so feel free to criticize

Disclaimer: if I owned pokemon I wouldn’t need to write fan fics

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The day dawned gloriously out side the window of the pokemon center. Ash stretched luxuriously and hopped out of his bed now that he was 16 he started to finally mature and was now waking up with the first rays of the sun. he looked over fondly at is first pokemon pikachu. He chuckled to himself watching the little electric rodent nuzzle the fresh ketchup bottle in his sleep. Ash then got up and went to freshen up in the bathroom. He quickly took a steaming shower washing the night grime off his body. He stepped out of the shower wrapping himself up in a towel. He wiped a large enough spot on the mirror for him to see his face. He had found himself growing facial hair now that he was getting earlier but the excitement quickly after the first few cuts and cases of razor burns. He grumbled as he rummaged around in his nap sack for his razor.

It was at this point that his pika pal woke up. “ Morning buddy”

“Pika Pi” (morning ash)

After the duo was cleaned up and ready to go the went out and picked up the rest of Ash’s pokemon at the front desk. After thanking the Joy on duty they took a seat at a table and waited for their most faithful friends to arrive and for them to continue on their way.

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Roughly a half hour later and after both ash and pikachu had had their morning coffee. Ash looked up and say a large muscular man about the age of twenty and a girl with flowing red hair walking towards him.

“Morning Brock, Morning misty”

“Morning Ash” they said in unison

“So ready to go see your mom” Misty Waterflower said with her aqua eyes hovering just over the edge of her coffee cup in what she hoped was an alluring way. She didn’t know that she had this catch hooked along time ago if one of them would just admit it.

Ash looked strait back into that come hither look with his long raven hair hanging back over his shoulders with just one strand hanging over his left eye in a way that he didn’t notice (what do you expect even though he’s older he’s still Ash) drove the teenage girl across from him wild.

“of course I don’t think my mother would have it any other way”

“ O wow I amazed you finally can remember something from the day before beside what you ate” Misty recoiled in side herself why had she just said that things had been going so well.

For Ash the spell was broken. He sat bolt upright making all his hair not held back by his hat fall in to his face as he gnashed his teeth. Misty had seen this expression all to often this was his battling face and she notice that she was more and more finding that she was putting herself into situations where she was on the receiving end of this powerful and intimidating gaze.

“I was just concerned that you would be to fat to fit on the bus” Ash said as he and his pokemon stormed off.

Brock Slate rolled his eyes “I left the gym for this”

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End part one well I hope it wasn’t too bad please review and ill ne coming with part two as soon as I can

Hell Blade