Part 1

Five billion years ago,

An egg hatched, creating the Alpha deity Arceus.  It then split 
itself into 9 parts. The beings created, Dialga and Palkia, started 
time and space. Then Groudon, Kyorgre, and Rayquaza created the 
planet.  Then the God of Life, Ho-Oh, and the God of Death, 
Giratina, started the basic organisms.  Lugia and Darkrai created 
seasons and dreams respectively, establishing the concept of time 
on early life.  The beasts were known as the 9 dragons.  If all 9 
Dragons remerge into Arceus, infinite power would be unlocked.  
Seven years ago, a man with the power to reform Arceus and 
control all of that power had risen.  So the 9 dragons chose nine 
people as vessels of their power to annihilate this unspeakable evil.  
The progenitor wars have begun.

Pure Energy
     A beautiful coliseum appears on the horizon.  The beautiful 
red and amazing architecture give the perfect background to a great 
contest stage.  The semi-finals of the Sinnoh Pokemon Grand 
Festival are about to begin.  The four semi-finalists appear.  One is 
a brown haired girl in a crimson dress.  Another one is a green 
haired man in an ebon tux. A blue haired girl in a pink dress.  And 
a red haired girl in blue body armor with a helmet that blocks the 
face.

     “Four people have made it this far but only one will make it 
out on top.  Will it be May and her Blaziken, Drew and his Flygon, 
or Dawn and her Empoleon.  It could even be the peviously 
unknown Aquata and her Milotic.  The judges have finished the 
pairings and are about to announ…”
     
     “That won’t be necessary,” shouted Aquata.  “I’ll take you all 
on at once.”  
     
     May dumbfound, responds, “If you wish to die?!”
     
     “Then let’s get this over with!”
      
     The crowd’s excitement level is going off the charts.  Ash is 
unsuccessfully trying to shut it out.
     
     “This isn’t noise I can feel the primal energy of the crowd 
itself.”   Ash is shocked Brock has the same problem.  
     The excitement isn’t do bad that Ash can’t focus on the battle 
but the problem is that is it feels so alien.  
     “Ash notices also that the red haired Aquata appears to feel 
the energy but seems to embrace it.  
     “This fight will start now,” said the announcer.  
     
     May, Drew, and Dawn toss their poke balls with a look of 
confidence in their eyes.  Aquata however destroys their looks by 
sending out her Milotic with a jet of water from her hand.  In an 
attempt to end the fight quickly, May uses Blast Burn, Drew uses 
Hyper Beam, and Dawn uses Hydro Cannon at the same time on 
Aquata’s Milotic.  She however whispers, “Substitute,” so none of 
her opponents’ moves do anything.  She uses the recharge time to 
launch a devastating Surf and KO them all in one shot.  
     
     The energy of the crowd is so intense that Ash and Brock 
pass out.  Aquata gathers enough strength to take the trophy before 
even she passes out. When she hits the ground, her helmet breaks 
in half.  
     
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