Part 2:
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"Ah, we finally reached Cherrygrove City and it's only 7 o'clock." Marc said stretching his limbs.
"Yeah p.m.. We left New Bark Town at noon it took us seven full hours to get here. It usually only takes two. But excusssse me. Mr. Pokemon trainer had to go fight each amd every single pokemon we came by!" Larotta screamed at Marc, " Now we're going to have to stay the night here and get the egg back to Elm tomorrow."
"Jeez clam down. It was well worth it my Totodile and my Charmander got 10 levels higher each. I'll just call Elm from here..."
"And?"
"Shh, look. I'm gonna catch it." Marc whispered pointing to a small little brown pup.
"That's an Eevee." Larotta said slightly excited.
"Frankly I don't give a damn what it is. I'm just gonna catch it. Go Charmander! Leer attack then ember!" The leer attack lowered the Eevee's defenses and the small ember quickly turned into a mad fire over the pup's brown fur, "Oh crap. Totodile dose those flames with your water gun." The water put out the flames but now the Eevee was weak."
"Pokeball go!" Marc said but soon a sweatdrop formed on his head as he realized he didn't have one." Uh Loratta could I borrow a pokeball."
"Aargh! Here but you owe me."
"Yeh, Yeh." Marc said throwing the pokeball. It hit the Eevee dissovling it into a red ray. The ball shook three times before it stopped signifying that the Eevee was now Marc's.
"Good job Charmander, Totodile." he said giving them a pat on the head and allowing them to walk to the pokemon center with him.
"Hello, My name is Nurse Joy how may I help you?"
"Could you heal my pokemon?"
"Of course young man." As soon as his pokemon were healed he let them out for some air.
"Hey Eevee sorry about roughing you up back there. I hope you can forgive me. I'm a really nice guy ask Totodile or Charmander." he said offering his new Eevee aa poke treat. It took it and licked Marc's cheek. Marc laughed and returned his pokemon to their pokeballs.
"Here's your room key. Your room number is 31. I'll be in 32. You'll have a wake-up call at 7. Seven a.m. for your information. We need to get out nice and early do we can get that egg. I wonder what pokemon could be inside it!" she exclaimed happily as she ran to her room.
"Heh that kid's weird."

End Part 2.