_METAL_ODAIRU_

 

this is my first fic so if you want to tell me how
you like it at williamwest@carolina.net dont be too
mean so now on  with the story

 

 

the adventure

 

 

On this day ash and his friends brock and misty
were on their way to a new town where ash can get an element badge this will
lead too new adventures new freinds and some freakish things in the new town

 

brock:I hope we get to the town soon

misty:yeah me too

ash:me three

pikachu:pika(yeah me four)

togepi:togi toie

togepi was interrupted by misty

misty:this i getting a little
outlandish

ash and brock sweatdrop

about and hour later they arrive at shadow
town

all:wooooooow

the city was not much of a shadow town there were
bight lights everywhere

ash:im going to find the gym

misty and brock:ok

charizard pops out of his pokeball

charizard:chaaaaaaar(ok)

ash:charizard your coming to

charizard uses flamethrower on ashes
head

ash:or        
maybe            not
eeeeeeeeew

ash falls over

ash gets up takes all his pokemon and finds the gym
in about 2 minuts\

ash opens the doors of the gym and and
says

ash:i challenge the leader of this gym

voice:well you want a battle then lets
go

a boy about ashes age steps out of the
shadows

boy:2 pokemon apeice

boy:im william and i know your ash kechum dont ask
how i know i just know

ash:how do you know my name

boy:(sweat drops) uh i saw you out side talking to
your friends

ash:ok well lets start

william:GO ODAIRU!

ash:go pikachu

pikachu:piiiiiiiika

auther:yes i know ash hasent seen an odairu but ive
got to get off the computor in a minut and i have to make this
quick

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battle mode on

 

 

pikachu thunder bolt

the electricity hits odairu barly hurting
it

odairu hyper beam

the beam just barly missed pikachu

pikachu thunder full power

the bolts hit odairu knocking it out
cold

go ZAPDOS!

ash:waaaaaaaaaa

pikachu fainted at that moment

i know this is a long shot but go
charizard!

the fire pokemon came out of its pokeball and it
glared a zapdos

zapdos thunder beam attack

charizard fire blast

 the attacks met but the thunder beam just
charged up the fire and ash won

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

battle end

 

 

 

 

well thats it for chapter one so we will see whats
going to happen in this exiting story(well sorta exiting)

this is _METAL_ODAIRU_ SIGHNIG
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