Positive Criticism

by Samantha Sad Eyes

blugurl182@chickmail.com
PART 1 

Disclaimer: I do not, will not, ever own Pokemon. I am only interest in making 
interesting story plots for the orginal characters because the TV series is 
kinda corny.

Brief Description: Misty is positive Ash likes her and enjoys teasing him about 
it when they set off on an errand for Proffessor Oak. ash kinda likes it and 
goes along with it until a pair of new Team Rocket members and their Fearow show 
up. A horrible accident happens and Misty and Ash and placed in the same 
hospital rooms. The long days are numbed when Ash and Misty start to talk to 
each about what the hate about each and what they like. The outcome is hilarious 
but still touching. ENJOY! NOTE: ASH IS 18, MISTY IS 18, and BROCK IS 20


	"I know it..I know he loves me!" Misty fell back onto her bed and kicked 
her slim legs in the air. She happily rejoiced this fact. A couple of minutes 
ago, she had overhead Ash and Brock talking in the den and the conversation was 
mainly about her. "He loves me! And I love him! This is sucha  perfect match!" 
Misty giggled. Togetic, the evolved form of Togepi, raised it's head sleepily 
from it's tiny pokemon basket. It yawned and flapped it wings in tired joy.
	'Finally...I knew those two would get together someday. Now i don't have 
to listen to her complaining..' Togetic said to itself. Than it settled back 
down into it's bed.

	Ash flipped Poke'Hospital on. He leaned forward as a couple of TV doctors 
raced a trainer and his Growlithe into the ER. "SALINE! WE NEED TO INTABATE! 
HOW'S THE GROWLITHE?" Brock settled himself on the couch.
	"Hey, Where's Misty?" Ash shrugged not taking his eyes off the TV action. 
Brock put his hands behind his head. "I just got a call from Joyla." Ash gave a 
small thumbs up sign, still not able to tear his eyes off the screen. Joyla was 
Brock's girlfriend. SHe was in close relation to Joy but didn't look like her. 
Instead of pink hair and wanting to become a Poke'Nurse, she had bright blue 
hair and wanted to become a Rock star.
	"RING RING RING! PHONE CALL! PHONE CALL!" Ash sighed impatiently and got 
up. He picked up the receiver and pushed the button on the monitor.
	"Ash! Nice to see you again!" Professor Oak was there looking a tad bit 
serious. Ash smiled and nodded.
	"Yeah Professor Oak! Whaddya need?" Professor Oak held up a finger.
	"Ahh yes. I was just about to get to that. I need you to run a small 
errand for me. Could you possibly go to Viridian City and buy me a two dozen 
pokeballs, two dozen super potions, a fire stone, a moon stone, and a water 
stone?" Ash's eyes nearly fell out of his head.
	"DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH THAT MONEY IS GONE TO COST??!!" Ash shouted. 
Professor Oak yelped and fell over backwards. He got up quickly.
	"Yes. top by my lab and I'll give you the money. I'm conduction some new 
research on how evolution stones may be able to be used once. And plus I'm don't 
really want to go anywhere today!" Professor Oak grinned and Ash fell over 
backward.
	"WAAAAAA! Okay Professor. See ya." Ash hung up and called out to Pikachu. 
The famous yellow Pokemon jumped up and landed on Ash's shoulder. Misty ran down 
the stairs that moment smiling and all red. SHe had her hair down and had some 
it pulled back with two blue butterflyclip. Her clothes had changed seriously, 
she was now wearing white jean capris and a blue polyester tank.
	"Hi Ash." She said with small stars in her eyes. "DO I look good?" Ash 
stared, his mouth hanging open. Pikachu reached around and pulled his chin back 
up to where it was supposed to be.
	"Pika pi.." It said. Ash nodded.
	"Ya..look..g-g-great!" Misty didn't even blush but flung her hair behind 
her shoulder.
	"Why thank you." SHe walked over to the shoepile and slipped on her blue 
platform knockoff sneakers.
	"Hey Brock! I gotta go run an errand for Professor Oak! Be back later!" 
There was no reply only snoring. Ash smiled and as he turned around he ran right 
into Misty. He was now at least a foot taller and she smiled.
	"Can I go with Ashy-boy?" Ash blushed. Misty had never talked to him like 
that before. God, she was beautiful. How he wanted to run his fingers through 
her hair and kiss her. But he couldn't. 
	"S-s--s..I guess." He said. Misty smiled teasingly.
	"Thanks." 

	Ash knocked on the lab door. Oak stumbled out and slammed the door closed. 
"That Muk of yours is so...loving." Oak said out of breath. Ash smiled.
	"THe money? You don't expect me to pay for that all by myself do ya?" Oak 
smiled and as he dug in his pocket his eyes spotted Misty.
	"Why Misty. YOu look fantastic. Amazing.." He winked at Ash who blushed. 
Misty smiled.
	"Thank you Professor Oak." Oak handed Ash the money.
	"There ya go Ash. Now hurry!" Ash smiled and he and Misty set off.

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This is not my first fanfic I have tons stored away in my files. But this is the 
first I have ever submitted. Please tell me how you like it. FLamers are 
apprectiated but after their read, My cute lil Blissey will douse them with 
Metronome. Stay tunes for my next part, THANK YOU!