Positive Criticsm By Samantha Sad Eyes blugurl182@chickmail.com Part 2 WARNING: VIOLENCE!! Disclaimer: Pokemon is not mine. If this disclaimer isn't enough for you go back and look at the disclaimer in the part. Thank you. Misty smirked inward. Shehad Ash exactly where she wanted him. He was so cute when he blushed. Catching herself just before she tripped over a rock, she smiled. "Ash are we almost there?" She rubbed up against him affectionately. Ash smirked and put his arm around her shoulders and squeezed. "Yeah Misty, Just through the forest." Misty jumped away from him. "VIRIDIAN FOREST?!" Ash stepped back. "YEah We hafta go through the forest to get to Viridian Misty!" Pikachu clutched to Ash's hat. "Bugs! I don't like bugs!" Misty said. Ash gently pushed her as he started walking again. "C'mon Misty! Big girls don't cry." Misty gave a dry laugh. "HA ha.." "Welcome to Team Rocket. I hope you'll be happy here." Giovanni patted Persian on the head and rubbed his finger over it's jewel. The two new members bowed in sync and smirked evily. The girl had long white hair and the boy had short and spiky black hair. "Thank you Giovanni. We are eager to know of our mission." said the girl. Giovanni reached out his ringed hand and grabbed a piece of paper. He handed it to his Persian who strutted over to them and dropped the paper in the girls hand. "This boy has caused us a lot of trouble. His Pikachu is our target though. It's the most powerful Pikachu I have ever seen. Capture it for me by any means. And if those bumbling fools Jessie and James get in your way..Kill them." The boy nodded a piece of black hair falling in front of his green eyes. "Don't worry Giovanni. We'll do what we have to." The girl set the piece of paper back down on the desk and whisked a piece of long white hair behind her ear revealing her beautiful baby blue eyes. Her smirk revealed tiny fangs behind ruby lips. Misty jumped onto Ash's back clutching his neck. She laughed as Pikachu jumped on her head in mock anger. Ash chuckled and started running with Misty still on his back. "ASH! SLOW DOWN! AHAHAH!" She laughed. Ash jumped over a rock and landed on top of it than pushed off with his feet and landed in a tree branch. Misty rolled off his back and sat on the tree branch. "So Misty, Hungry?" Ash asked. Pikachu ran up the tree and came down with three apples. "Thanks." Misty took the apple and met eyes with Ash. Her ocean blue eyes flickered in some sort of excitement. Ash blushed and laughed putting a hand behind his head. "Well eat up!" Misty moved closer and rest her head on ash's shoulder. Pikachu sat on Ash's head and laughed. "Pika ahahaha!" Suddenly, it's ears picked up a sound. Electricity sparked from it's cheeks. "Piakchu?" Ash asked. Suddenly the branch they were sitting on collapsed. Misty screamed as they fell the 25 ft. Ash grabbed her and fell with his back to the ground. Pikachu clutched to Ash's face. THey landed with a thud and Ash hit his head on the rock. He was unconcious. Blood spread from his head. Misty rolled out of his arms and sat up. "Ash!" Pikachu lay next to him unconciouss too. Misty rushed over to them. She looked up at the tree. A neat saw mark was where the branch once was. Misty narrowed her eyes and spun around. "Who..Who's there?" SHe called. A girl with long white hair appeared in the path. "I'm here..." Misty nearly choked. THe girl was wearing a black Rocket uniform and a deadly grin on her face. "My name is Medema. This is my partner, Leono. We're here for the Pikachu." Misty looked at Pikachu. "No!" Misty ran jumped over Ash and grabbed Pikachu. She looked down at Ash. 'I can't leave him behind. Ash..Please wake up! Please! I need you!' Medema and Leono (who had magically appeared behind her) started to close in. Misty noticed the glint of white fangs from MEdema's mouth. She gasped. Ash started to groan. "Ash! Please! WAKE UP!" Misty cried as Medema grabbed her. Ash's eyes shot open as he heard Misty's painful scream. He coughed slightly as Pikachu jumped onto his stomach. Pikachu shook it's head. "PIKA!" It cried. Ash looked over blurred. Misty was being held by a girl. She looked in serious pain. Ash got up. He shook his head and saw the knife protruding from her stomach. "Jesus..MISTY!" Suddenly her face twisted into some sort of silent agony as the girl behind her twisted the knife around in her gut than ripped it out. Medema kicked Misty into Ash's arms. He caught her clumsily the blood trickling down his arm. "My god!" Ash glared at the girl and boy and Piakchu jumped onto his shoulder. Misty stood up against Ash's commands. "Ughh.." SHe turned around. Glaring at the girl, she weakly said to Ash. "YOu get the boy..I'll get the girl." Ash shook his head. "Misty your way to weak!" Misty turned to look at him. "Jsut do it! Ok?" Than she turned again but turned back to him. Walking up to him she kissed him one hand to her bleeding wound. Than without waiting she broke the kiss and ran at MEdema. Medema had the knife ready but Misty wasn't ready to get stabbed again. Leono chuckled as Ash and Pikachu approached him. Leono rushed forward and before Ash knew it he had gut checked him. Ash rammed his elbow into LEono's neck and shoved his knee into his gut. Pikachu shoved it's sharp claws into Leono's back and as ash's released from him Pikachu shocked him. Leono whipped out his pocket knife, and shoved it into Ash's side. Ash strongly grabbed his wrist and cracked it. Taking the knife was a great struggle but he had it in his grip. Ash slashed the Leono's throat and he fell to the floor dead. Ash threw the knife down and ran to Misty's aid. Misty punched the girl and cried as Medema's fangs caught her wrist. Misty swung her leg around and hit Medema in the stomach. Medema coughed and than stabbed Misty in the leg. Misty winced and rammed her other hand into Medema's face. Than before Medema could regain balance, Misty ripped the knife out of her leg painfully and shoved it itno Medema's chest. Medema clutched Misty. "I'm...not...going.....alone.." Misty desperately tried to escape Medema's clutches. She heard pounding footsteps behind her. Ash. She knew she could count on him. Medema pulled out a small device. BEfore Misty could move Medema shoved the device into Misty's chest. "AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" SHe screamed. White hot energy raced through her. Ash saw Misty fly step backwards an electrical current fly from her. A device stuck out of her chest. Tears stained her face as her piercing scream hit his heart. Pikachu raced up to her and pulled the device from her, enjoying the shock but mroe intent on getting the device from Misty. Medema lay bleeding on the ground dead while Misty collapsed. "MISTY!" Ash caught her smoking body. He picked her up and suddenly realized how precious she was to him. How light she was, he thought as he ran to Viridian. Pikachu rode atop his shoulder as the Viridian Hospital came into view. "Please..Misty..Don't go..not today.." Tears fell on Misty's pale face. Ash looked down at her and gulped. "I vow that when you die..I..I'll die..We'll die together..I promise." Ash was too busy on running and concentrating so as not to blackout from his bleeding wound in his side so he didn't hear Misty's meek and feeble reply. "i promise too..." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ @ } ------------------ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please email me blah blah blah blah blah and that that. Flamers are appreciated but will be doused after being read by my Blissey and her Metronome attack. THANKS FOR CONTINUING TO READ MY STORY! NEXT PART WILL BE COMING SOON!