Positive Critiscm

by Samantha Sad Eyes

AAMRN

Part 3 WARNING: Some violence!!

Disclaimer: I do not own Pokemon never have, never will. Anything I forgot..Sue me..j/k!!

	Ash flung himself into the electrical doors. Blood dripped down his side and Misty's wounds 
were much worse. People in the waiting gasped but did not move from their seats as he stumbled in. A 
nurse looked up.
	"Oh dear! We need two gurneys! Pronto! Young man, What happened?" The nurse asked as she 
ran up to them.
	"We were attacked in Viridian Forest. Please..Help her first she's in much worse condition!" The 
nurse looked at Misty.
	"Gut wound and electrical shock. Looks like the kind of device used could have been more life 
threatning. Did your Pikachu abosorb the shock?" Ash nodded. He helped the Nurse put Misty's barely 
alive body on the stretcher. blood soaked the white sheets.
	"I'm Dr. Hartan." THe 'nurse' said. Ash looked up.
	"Your the doctor?" Dr. Hartan nodded. Another gurney pushed in.
	"Okay! Hop on there." Ash watched helplessly as Misty's body was wheeled away.

	Dr. Hartan groped Misty's heart in her hand. Due to the intensity of the wounds, they had to go in 
and do some sweing of Misty's stomach. Everything was going well, until suddenly MIsty had flatlined. 
	"C'mon C'mon c'mon people! I'm not letting this one die!" Misty's eyes fluttered. 

	Misty screamed as she fell. Suddenly she felt like she was floating. Misty opened her eyes 
slightly. "I promise.." She said. 

	Ash watched the ordeal from the window. His wound had been stitched up right away. It was 
really nothing more than a flesh wound. Other than that he had only suffered bruises and scrapes. His 
heart sank when the doctors stopped. Dr. Hartan shook her head and looked up at the clock. Ash saw her 
eyes fall on him and she motioned him in.

	Misty felt someone put a gentle hand on her face. She touched her cheek but ntohing was there. 
She started to panick. "Am I dead? No..PLEASE!" She begged. "I PROMISED! I PROMISED ASH! 
PLEASE!" OPEN YOUR EYES! came a call and Misty opened her eyes as far as they would go. 
Suddenly, she saw Ash and the amazed Doctors faces.

	"Misty!" Dr. Hartan ran up to Misty's bedside. 
	"DO you feel in pain?" She asked. Misty nodded, wincing. A anthestia mask was placed over 
Misty. She panicked.
	"no.....darkness..please...no.." She begged quietly. Ash grasped her hand and Misty felt at ease. 
But still she was afraid of never waking up again.

	Misty opened her eyes and saw Ash laying on a hospital bed next to her. He hardly looked at all 
enough injured to be in a hospital bed. When she looked down at herself, all she saw was tubes. Small 
tears escaped her eyes and as she went to wipe them away, she saw that IVS and needles stuck in her wrist 
everywhere. 
	"Misty?" Ash got up and walked over to her. He saw the tears and wiped them from her eyes. 
"Misty..Your ok...Everything is fine." MIsty nodded.
	"ash...I want all these tubes out of me..Take them all out!" sHe said. Ash beeped for the nurse. 
Dr. HArtan came instead.
	"Misty! The luckiest one of them all. What's the matter." Misty motioned to the tubes and IVS.
	"I want them removed." Dr. Hartan smiled.
	"I'll see what I can do." She checked Misty's vital signs and gave a thumbs up. Carefully, all of 
Misty's tubes were removed.
	"Thank you." Misty said feeling comfortable. Dr. Hartan smiled.
	"No problem. We need to keep both of you on observation for a few days. The knife had some 
sort of poison on it..We think we cleared it out of all your systems but we want to be sure." Misty nodded.
	"So.." Ash said as Dr. HArtan left. Misty brought Ash's face closer to hers and kissed him.
	"Thank you Ash.." Ash blushed.
	"Heh..Well.." Misty smiled.
	"Well..We're going to get bored sitting here..Sooo Let's play a little game!" Ash smiled.
	"Ok!" Misty sat up in her bed and Ash pulled up a chair.
	"I tell you something I don't like about you. Than you do the same to me. THan we tell each other 
what we like about each other!" Ash grinned and nodded.
	"Sounds like a fun game. I'll start."

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HAHAHAHAHAH! SUSPENSE! After the conclusion of this story is written and on the Web..I'm going 
to start a Crossover. It's Sailor Moon cuz I LUV sailor Moon. So I hope you'll keep an eye otu!