“The GR” Part 1: pilot (decided to start with that ^^;) Okay so I’m starting a new Fanfic. It’s called “the GR” GR is for goldenrod city. The story line is mainly based in goldenrod city. haha the idea was from the “THE OC”. It’s a drama with twists, scandals, and shocking ending. Ash, May, Brock, Misty, and Violet are all traveling. Many characters come and go. its as well from Msty’s pov Ages: Ash-15 Misty-15 Brock-19 Violet-17 May-15 Max: 10 Guest stars: Kaitlin: 17 “May, stop” yelled violet. This is the 3rd consecutive week violet and May have been at each other’s throats. “It’s a frickin margarine container” I said annoyed, putting it in the fridge. After that, there was a long period of silence. Brock turned on the TV and watched the sports channel. Max slowly left the room and went to play videogames. Ash was making a double-decker sandwich. ‘so…” I started off. “Kaitlin is coming tomorrow”. “Your sister who went to a boarding school?” asked Brock. “Why did she even go to a boarding school”. “Well... It was more of a military school” said violet thinking. “And no, she wasn’t forced to go there. She wanted to go there”. “Who in hell would do that” asked ash stuffing his face. I and violet shrugged. ”we dunno. Kaitlin was a crazy girl. Very independent. She made a decision of going to a military school, and she stuck with it.” “.. Is she hot?” asked Brock. Violet threw a pillow at him. “Anyways...” I said breaking the silence. “We haven’t seen her in 3 years. gonna be a bit awkward but whatever”. “Well I hope she’s not all weird” said may, who hasn’t spoken in a while. She was too busy flirting with ash. Everyone knows she likes him. But it’s hard to tell if he reciprocates those feelings. He’s very friendly with her, but we can’t if he’s flirting or ash is just being “ash”. “imma gonna go out to the festival” started violet .anyone come with?”. I particularly didn’t feel like going out. I opened my “us weekly” magazine and started reading. ‘cya y’all tonight” she said shutting the door behind her. “Hey ash,” hey started May. “wanna go for a walk?” “Uh... Okay” replied ash. “lemme get my coat”. May immediately smiled after he left the room. “Let’s go” he said “see you guys later” said ash. He and may walked out. Suddenly I heard my cell vibrate. I reached into my purse and turned on my cell phone. It said “one next text message” I opened it. From: kait87 Hey sis! watsup? So excited to cya soon! Speaking of soon, sooner than u think. My flight is early, and I’m gonna be here @ 7:00 pm. you don’t have to pick me up from the airport. I have a map. cya later. luv ya,? Kaitlin xoxox Same old kaitlin. Doesn’t seem like she’s changed much. “Brock, kaitlin just texted me.” she said she’ll be here @ 7 today.”, I told him. I checked the clock. It was 6:45 “Wow okay.” said Brock. “I’ll call the others”. Everyone immediately rushed to the hotel. “Is she here yet?” asked violet, running in through the door panting. “No don’t worry” i said. Suddenly, the door opened and ash and May walked in holding hands. They both looked extremely happy. Ash went to put his coat away.it was obvious they were a couple. “ewww I whispered in a hushed voice. “Ash and may.. What does he see in her? “Your telling me”. Said violet shivering. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. “Its kaitlin” I said. I got up to open the door. Lone and behold, there was kaitlin, with her uptown brown long silky hair, sunglasses, her pink suitcases (5 of them) her mini skirt and her pullover, as a well as a few necklaces. “Hey all!!!” she screamed. “KAITLIN!” I said giving her a hug. Violet also rushed over and gave her a hug. After she met everyone she went to unpack her stuff. Brock and ash carried her 5 luggages to the room she’d be sharing with us. “Thanks” she said. “-no-no problem” said Brock struggling to get his words out and panting. “Well kaitlin seems settled in.” I said lying in bed. “I don think May likes her much.” pondered Violet. “May was so rude to kaitlin, and she ignored her”. “mmm” I replied agreeing. I never really liked her that much. She’s such a… brat” “Yeah” answered violet. “Probably cause she and ash talked the whole time. mehh she’s so totally jealous. “Do u guys mind if I put kaitlin clothes in the laundry hamper with your clothes? She asked me too put her dirty clothes in the laundry” said May suddenly popping in. I was too shocked and uptight to talk. “Sure--.” answered violet trying to sound casual. May left the room. I got up to close and lock our door. “pheww” I said relieved. “Anyways, where’s kaitlin?” I asked. Violet answered “oh she’s in the kitchen eating a sandwich. “Anyways, today’s been a long day. I’m gonna sleep. Good night. “Night” I replied “Wake up wake up” I heard someone faintly saying. I opened my eyes slowly. It was kaitlin. “Kaitlin what?” I asked. “Lets go shopping!” she exclaimed. I didn’t get a chance to respond. I got dressed and we met violet in the lobby. We went to goldenrod mall. After we went to about every single store, and shopped till we dropped, we went back to the hotel. “pheww that was a good run” I said. “Shopping is so relaxing.” agreed violet. “Totally” joined in kaitlin as she opened the door. When we walked, everyone was starring at us in a suspicious horrified way. “What’s going on?” kaitlin asked slowly. “Let’s see. Maybe one of you three might want to explain why this was in your room” , said may curtly. Ash took out a giant machete. We all starred horrified and look back and forth at each other. “I was walking into your three’s room and I was looking for my purse, since you know I always forget were I put. When I reached underneath Misty’s bed, I felt something sharp. I slowly pulled it out. And there it was”, finished May. “So who’s it?” asked Brock sharply. “We almost called the cops.” none of us said anything. My head was spinning. I know violet would never keep anything like that. And kaitlin... I actually barely know her. “Misty…” started ash. “It WAS under your bed”. everyone looked at me. I can’t believe they would accuse me. I know I have a temper, but a damn machete!! “Ash! I said, my temper rising. “We’ve known each other since like.. Forever! Don’t you trust me?” he looked down. I was shocked. How could he not believe me! “Well which of you guys is it?” asked May. “Or maybe you were all in this together”. “NO!” we all exclaimed at the same time. No one said anything for a little while. “I see” answered Brock thoughtfully. Well, for now just stay put. I and Ash are going to look around the apartment and in your bags and stuff to see if there’s anything else. Max, go to your room. May, stay here with them”. “Hey! Cut in Kaitlin angrily. “You are not allowed to look through my suitcase or purse.” “Kaitlin, your just making us suspicious by saying that” retorted May. “Keep your mouth shut”. Kaitlin didn’t respond anything to that. Me, violet, Kaitlin were completely silent, as May gave us the most evil look ever. They could call the police on us, they could tell us to leave the hotel and stop traveling with them. What are we going to do...? Note: so what do you think? Reviews please!