Hey Tweeny here. I’ve decided to change the style of my story rather than writing it as if Jeremy was telling the story I’ve did it as if I (Tweeny) is telling you. I find it a lot easier somehow?! Oh and I’ve also decided to include a Pokemon English speech! Anywayz please enjoy! Chapter 2! Jeremy: “Eevee tackle!” Eevee ran towards the small red worm as fast as he could so he could give it an almighty tackle that could hopefully make the wild Wurmple faint or at least run away. Jeremy: “Watch out Eevee!” Wurmple pointed its rear end at Eevee and let out a silky white string flying towards him. Eevee tried to stop running but he was going so fast that he ran straight into the Wurmple’s string shot, Eevee was covered in the sticky string making it harder for him to move. Jeremy: “Oh man....” The wild Wurmple turned its back to Eevee and crawled away. Jeremy on the other hand ran over to Eevee and hacked away at the string getting covered in the string himself. Jeremy: “Once I’ve got this stuff off ya make sure you give that wiggling twig a lesson” Eevee: “Eevee evv” (I can’t believe he turned his back on me) When most of the sticky white string was off Eevee he ran at Wurmple and head butted it, making it fly over the bushes and into a solid tree. Wurmple: “Wuurrr” (Ouch) The worm slipped down the tree and on to the ground. Jeremy: “Way to go Eevee” Eevee: “Eevee...” (Well you know…) Jeremy: “If only I had some Pokeballs with me I could have caught it” Jeremy walked over to the bush where it fell to check if it was alright. He picked the Wurmple up in its hands and looked at Eevee. Eevee: “Eevvve?” (You told me to do it!) He put the worm into the bush so it wouldn’t get eaten or attacked by a Taillow. Jeremy: “Its ok, I think you just scared it. I’ll just leave it in the bush so it’s safe” As he pulled his hands up from in the bush he noticed he still was covered in Wurmple’s string shot. He looked over at Eevee to how much crap he had on him. Jeremy: “I think we need to get cleaned up?!” They both made their way to Oldale Town, it was only 10 minutes from Littleroot but it took them half an hour because of that wild Wurmple. Jeremy: “We’re here Eevee” Oldale town was a small and quite town unlike Lilcove city. Because it had the biggest Pokemart and the Pokemon Contest was held there, it was always busy and packed with trainers and Pokemon from around Hoenn. Jeremy: “Let’s get cleaned up before we see Aaron” Eevee: “Evv eev” (Yeah, how am I meant to attract any ladies looking like this?!) They both walked over into the Pokemon centre. It was really quite unlike Lilcove’s centre, it was always packed with trainers and sick Pokemon. Jeremy looked around and saw one of the trainers from Littleroot with his Sandshrew asleep next to him. Jeremy picked up Eevee and walked over to the desk where Nurse Joy was standing Nurse Joy: “Welcome, is it just your Eevee that needs recovering?” Jeremy: “Yeah we sort of got into a sticky situation with a Wurmple” Nurse Joy: “I see, well in that case I’ll take your Eevee and freshen it up while you go and clean your self up in the bathroom” Jeremy: “Cheers” Nurse Joy picked up Eevee and went into the back room. Eevee struggled to get free from her arms. Jeremy: “I’ll be right here Eevee she’s just going to clean you up” Eevee: “EVVVVEEE” (JEREMY DON’T LEAVE ME) Jeremy went into the bathroom and wiped the sticky string off his body with a damp cloth. He looked in the mirror and pulled some of the string from out his hair. Jeremy: “How’d it get in my hair?!” As he walked out Eevee was sitting on the desk waiting for him to return to pick him up. When Eevee saw him he jumped of the desk scaring Nurse Joy as she went to grab him. Jeremy: “I was only gone for 3 minuets Eve, your going to have to get used to it” Eevee: “Evv” (I know) Jeremy: “Thanks Nurse Joy” Nurse Joy: “My pleasure….?” Jeremy: “Jeremy” Nurse Joy: “It’s what I do for a living” Eevee jumped up at Jeremy’s right leg hoping to be picked up. Nurse Joy: “I bet it’s nice to have a Pokemon that adores you” Jeremy: “He don’t adore me his just a attention seeker” He bent down and rubbed him on the head. Eevee gently bit his hand. Jeremy: “OI! No biting!” Eevee: “Evve” (Pussy) Eevee wrapped his front paws around his arm, as he lifted his arm up he held it still looking Eevee in the eye. Jeremy: “Eve, what are you doing?” Eevee: “Evvvvee” (Just hanging around) At that point Eevee Jumped at his face and gently bit his nose and fell on to the floor on all four feet like a cat. Jeremy: “You little….” Eevee thought he was being serious when Jeremy bent down hiding his face as if he was crying. Eevee walked up to him slowly. Eevee: “Evv evvv?” (I’m sorry, you ok?) He nudged his cold wet nose between his wrists. Nurse Joy: “Oh my, are you ok Jeremy?” Jeremy grabbed Eevee by his waist and lifted him up side down. Jeremy: “You gonna bite me again?” Eevee: “EVVV” (Let go) Nurse Joy laughed at the two messing around. Jeremy pulled his Pokemon close and held him with one arm still hanging up side down. Eevee struggled to get free. Eevee: “EVV EVV EVVEE” (JEREMY IM SORRY LET ME GO) Nurse Joy: “It’s a shame that trainer doesn’t get along with his Pokemon like you two do” Jeremy: “Why what’s up with his Pokemon?” Nurse Joy: “His Sandshrew doesn’t listen to him all it does is sleeps” A young girl came running into the room holding a Totodile in her arms. Girl: “Please help, my Totodile got poisoned by a Wurmple” Nurse Joy: “its ok it happens all the time. It was nice talking to you Jeremy” Nurse Joy received the girls Totodile and walked off into the back room. Jeremy: “C’mon Eve lets go see Aaron” He let Eevee down and walked out of the Centre. Once outside he walked behind the Pokemon Centre and over to Aaron’s house. He walked up to the door and knocked. Aaron: “Hey Jeremy” He looked up at the bedroom windows to see if Aaron was there. Eevee: “Evv” (Over there) Jeremy looked behind him and saw Aaron walking up holding a Pokemart bag. Aaron: “Is that what Pokemon you got?” Jeremy: “Yeah beats what the others got” Aaron walked up to his house and stood in front of Jeremy. Aaron: “Your mum told me you was coming up today. She said you was gonna see if I wanted to tag along with ya” Jeremy: “When did she talk to you?” Aaron: “She rang me this morning” Jeremy: “So you coming along?” Aaron pulled out his keys from his combats pocket. Aaron: “Why would I have a Pokemart bag in my hand if I wasn’t?” Jeremy: “Thought you’d be kind and buy me some?!” Aaron put the keys into the door lock and unlocked the door. He looked back at Jeremy with a sarcastic expression. Aaron: “Not likely” Jeremy: “Where’s Lairon?” Aaron: “In its Pokeball. Come in.” Aaron walked in and went into the living room. Jeremy picked up Eevee and put him on his shoulder. Eevee: “Evvv” (I can get used to this) Jeremy walked in and closed the door behind him. As he turned around he jumped as Aaron was standing in front of him holding a back pack. Jeremy: “Geeez Aza, say something next time” Aaron laughed as he reached over to open the door. Aaron: “C’mon you’ve only got a year until the Pokemon league” Jeremy: “What ya mean only a year?” Aaron: “Well by the time you finish collecting the gym badges we’ll be old and wrinkly” Aaron walked out of his house with Jeremy following behind him. Jeremy: “Ok I bet ya I’ll be done and dusted before the league starts” Aaron: “What ever” Jeremy: “What ever?! You don’t think I can do it can ya?” Aaron: “Didn’t say that!” Eevee: “Evvv evv” (Ohh it’s getting good) Jeremy: “Yeah but ya meant it!” Aaron: “You probley will do it in about 2 maybe 3 years” Jeremy: “What makes ya say that?” Aaron: “Lighten up im just messing with ya” Aaron walked on as Jeremy stopped. Aaron: “Oh I didn’t tell ya, but I went to Lavaridge to see my brother and on the way I caught a Skarmory I was gonna call….?” Aaron noticed that Jeremy wasn’t with him. Aaron: “Oh thanks Jeremy make me look like im talking to myself” He thought 4 minuets after Jeremy left he came back holding a Pokemart bag. He walked up to Aaron who was sitting on the grass waiting for his return. Jeremy: “Thought I’d go and pick up a few things” Aaron looked up at Jeremy and stood up Aaron: “Next time tell me, I was walking along talking to myself. Your just lucky no one saw me” Aaron noticed Eevee wasn’t with him. Aaron: “Where’s Eevee?” Jeremy: “His in his Pokeball” Aaron: “So where we off now then?” Jeremy: “Petalburg City” Aaron: “You planning on getting a badge?” Jeremy: “Yep” Aaron: “I think you should skip that gym, loads of trainers think to start there but trust it isn’t, the cleaver trainers walk straight through that city and on to Rustboro city’s gym” Jeremy: “Did you go there first?” Aaron: “One mistake I wish I didn’t do, I had to rush Aron to the Pokemon Centre from one lousy tackle by a Loudred” Jeremy: “A what?!” Aaron: “A Pokemon…you know the little monster like pets that jump in and out of Pokeball’s?!” Jeremy: “I know what they are but what’s a Loudred?!” Aaron: “It’s just a loud Pokemon you’ll see some day, anyways we off to Rustboro city now?” Jeremy: “Yeah…you know the way?!” Aaron: “…HELLO, I’ve been there done that, never mind lets just leave!” Well that’s all for now I’m kinda tired and my brain isn’t functioning properly, Then again when doesn’t it?! Let me know what you think of my fiction so far E-mail me at Tinkerbell_0001@hotmail.com if you’ve got any ideas of what can happen on Jeremy’s journey let me know and If it’s good I’ll add it in one of the chapters! Luv Tweeny x